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原帖由 没有灵魂的鱼 于 2009-7-4 08:50 发表 
Feng MM, Keeping English diary will be helpful, whatever you write and however it look, just insist on writing, it does not matter even if you use"put somebody's hand heavily in somebody's face" instead of "slap", and with your knowlegde increasing, you would be able to correct the mistakes or improper expression by yourself, and you will see how much progress you make. at that time, you would enjoy the sense of achivement!!
误会了? 那咱们一句一句挑错[s:21]
Feng MM, Keeping English diary will be helpful
Feng MM, Keep English diarizing will be helpful
whatever you write and however it look, just insist on writing (whatever and however 形容词和副词能不能并列我首先有疑问 you write 和it look 有没这说法我也很疑惑)
no matter what you write out and how it looks like. just follow it.
it does not matter even if you use"put somebody's hand heavily in somebody's face" instead of "slap", (even if 是连词吧? 意思是没错 语法说不过去吧 要么只用even 要么都不要)
it does not matter you use"..." in the beginning.
with your knowlegde increasing, you would be able to correct the mistakes or improper expression by yourself, and you will see how much progress you make. 不挑语法了 这句逻辑递进思维太中文 mistakes or improper expression 前后不对称 而且这句子本身是个中文意思 progress you make? progress you've made差不多吧
you would be able to avoid mistakes by yourself with progressing of your eng skill.
at that time, you would enjoy the sense of achivement!!
这句不知道怎么改 sense of achivement 就这么着吧
至于思维惯性重排就是之前说的那个模式 加上连接词即可
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